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Maggie
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Come Spirit of God
A plea for revival
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Come Spirit of God
Revive us
Come listen to our prayer,
And fill our hearts
With Your great love
With no room for despair!
Come Spirit of God
Enlighten us
Come live within our hearts.
Reveal to us
Your endless love,
And help us play our part.
Come Spirit of God
And help us now
To spread Your Word around,
Help us to share
Your living Word
That Your love will abound.
Come Spirit of God
On us today
Don’t let our hearts grow cold
Receive our love
Receive our lives
And let Your Will unfold.
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| By Maggie
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Author's Comments: | We remember the time
when the apostles were filled with the Holy Spirit,
and spoke boldly of the Kingdom of God...
May we be open to His blessing as well! |
From the author's book: Living in the light of God\\\'s love. | | Chapter: Prayer | | Poem first accepted for publication on Nov 10 2006 |
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To be at one within the light of God, is to reach that happy place and I loved this in it's simplicity with a simple message of peace ... |  |
Reviewed by Tim
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What a warm and touching prayer. What would it have been like to have been there when the apostles were filled with the Holy Spirit? Your ... | |
Reviewed by TCart
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A beautiful uplifting prayer. I really liked the opening of each verse, "Come Spirit of God". It really worked well here. An interes ... | |
Reviewed by W. E. Mitchell
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To see one so openly and honestly profess their Faith and Love of God in a public forum such as this, is both a Blessing and as Inspirational as the w ... | |
Reviewed by Sir Poet
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Maggie ~ this is really a very emotionally appealing and inspirational poem/prayer. Well thought out and presented. Your intent is so pure ... | |
Reviewed by Susanne M. Psyris
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AMEN, MAGGIE!! WE NEED TO NOT ONLY PRAY FOR FILLING OF HIS HOLY SPIRIT WITHIN US, BUT IN OUR PRESIDENT AND ADMINISTRATIVE LEADERS ALL OVER T ... | |
Reviewed by Char
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Maggie: Amen Sister! Your message is loud and clear. I think it would be wonderful if we all prayed and felt filled with God's love. The world wou ... | |
Reviewed by JediMasterAJR
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I am always amazed how some people (like you dear Ruth) have found that complete inner happiness gained from the understanding and acceptance of your ... | |
Reviewed by John Henry
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Thanks for the reminder of what our life as a true follower of Christ is all about. We muct learn to forgive those who have sinned against us in orde ... | |
Reviewed by bigtsure
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Amen!
I am pleased to review this fine poem today, Ruth,
It is always uplifting to read of the Truth,
I can't compromise who I am at the core, ... | |
Reviewed by Juvie on Jun 05 2009
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a most enchanting prayer poem penned in such a passionate fashion...a prayer so needed by all in today's ever-growing moment of despair.....b ... | |
Reviewed by enchantedpoetess
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This is a very inspiring poem for me to find and enjoy with good rhymes and a great massage for all.
Thank you Maggie,
Warrior ... | |
Reviewed by Warrior
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What a wonderful prayer poem. Your words are inspirational, a powerful peice to read and enjoy. I love the flow, big smiles,
GP ... | |
Reviewed by GypsyPixie
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Hey Maggie,
This was a beautiful tribute / love letter to our heavenly father! What an AWESOME GOD WE HAVE! Your poem has a beautiful theme, rhythe ... | |
Reviewed by metamorphosis
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Maggie this is a beautiful prayer to
God. it reminds us to talk more open and look to His glory for our lives. I love this write, thank you. ... | |
Reviewed by redwen
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Maggie, the power of prayer can move mountains; the mountain of despair, hopelessness, illness, weakness. The spirit of God is one of faith and hope a ... | |
Reviewed by ShieldOfSouls
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This poem is most worthy of a repost again and again! I can hear this as a song. The Spirit of God is there for all who accept Him. Such a shame some ... | |
Reviewed by Vivian
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Yes, we do need God's Spirit to revive us now, especially in this trying time.. This was a powerful prayer poem, and I thank you for sharing it with u ... | |
Reviewed by jay5
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AMEN!! Wonderful words of wisdom, Maggie. We all need that revival of the Spirit so we can go out and share His love with those around us. Awesome wri ... | |
Reviewed by writerdreams
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A most inspiring poem and well received just after the news that our friend and poet Lela had gone on ahead.....Well written...and food for all.
One ... | |
Reviewed by Mollie
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A piece with postive messages and uplifting quality. The plea to open up hearts and be enlightened is heard within. You write from an inspiring place. ... | |
Reviewed by Indelible~Ink
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VERY MAJESTIC WRITING. THE WORDS FROM AN ANGEL AND MOST ADHEARED TO BY THIS PERSON. FINE STRUCTURE AND SO VERY UNDERSTANDABLE. IT WAS ALL MY PLEASURE ... | |
Reviewed by CDEEDS
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I enjoyed this immensely. Having just finished a three day revival using 2nd Chronicles 7:14 as our theme, I find this peace timely. ... | |
Reviewed by prince0498
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Hey Maggie, I think this would be a great song. Though I'm not musical, I could almost hear the melody. A much needed write - Kevin ... | |
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What a lovely poem/prayer that flows so smoothly from line to line. You are right - We must ask the Spirit of God to fill our lives so that despair ca ... | |
Reviewed by Melissa in Tokyo
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He is our comforter and our Salvation. Beautifully penned and full of truth. I love this well thought out and well written treasure about Him. God Ble ... | |
Reviewed by ROSES
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Amen. Pentecost and the holy spirit. Shout loud about the kingdom of God. Lovely reminder, blessings my friend
Love and light
agnes ... | |
Reviewed by agnespaddy
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I agree totally, this world needs a revival of the Lord, in the Lord's name! They are letting a few people take the word God and of God out of too muc ... | |
Reviewed by Janmp
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I pray that your lovely plea will be heard and answered. You poem of praise shows praise, honor and glory for the Lord. Thank you for sharing, Kathy ... | |
Reviewed by kgcummings
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that sound that you hear is a resounding Amen!...this world is in definite need of a spiritual revival ...thank you fo rhte beautiful prayer and remin ... | |
Reviewed by lost-in-a-dream
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This is wonderful Maggie, would make a lovely prayer to say every morning to start our day off just where it should begin! Hugs Benita ... | |
Reviewed by dahmom
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The pleas in this poem is applicable year round. At Easter it is especially important in an effort for us to return our thinking to GOD and the LORD. ... | |
Reviewed by raymondo77
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Maggie,
This is spiritually beautiful. Your poetry that gives God the glory he so deserves always warms my heart.
Hugs,
Kim ... | |
Reviewed by poetic chaos
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I love this Maggie. I read it and then said it as a prayer for me. Thank you for sharing your love and blessings with all of us. Hugs, Wilma ... | |
Reviewed by Dickson
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Your poem sends many meaningful messages to all---
how easily some forget that prayer and inspiration doesn't just come on Easter and Xmas..we need t ... | |
Reviewed by Aki
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AMEN and AMEN to your prayer of petition all our behalf. Straight to the the point and right to His heart and ears. Many blessing to you and yours my ... | |
Reviewed by Plantation
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Maggie, your inspiration radiates within my soul. I needed inspiration this morning, and youn have provided. I am right next to you in the belief that ... | |
Reviewed by KarenJeanMarie
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Maggie, an excelent write you have penned, the smooth rhyme scheme added to the image of a person kneeling and speaking with full heart right to God, ... | |
Reviewed by s7716
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THIS IS EXCELLENT LOVED THE RYTHM & FLOWS LIKE A SONG I THINK THIS WOULD MAKE A GREAT SONG I'M SURE HE WOULD AGREE!! BLESSED BE SABLE ... | |
Reviewed by sablelady
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I truly enjoyed this wonderful piece of poetry and it sways under the shade of our great tree site. Thanks for sharing and the inspiration whispers th ... | |
Reviewed by aryaindia
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Maggie this is also beautiful! I truly believe,..that what you say about the end times is true. Too much is too wrong,...how could it be any other w ... | |
Reviewed by grandniem
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such a lovely poem that inspires great faith and trust in the lord to come and help us in our hours of need and boy does this world need help i only w ... | |
Reviewed by mandydakin
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Wonderful poem Maggie, it might well be a hymn sung in church..I could well imagine from the congregation belting this one out....and the great messag ... | |
Reviewed by Dee
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Awesome job on this Prayer/poem, Maggie..Great job on this piece...great imagery, strong construction and flow of words and thoughts.You painted a goo ... | |
Reviewed by joeysgirl1
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Maggie, This poem really has touched my heart and soul! I really agree with you on this poem very deeply! The Spirit of God is always with us!! You re ... | |
Reviewed by luricsam
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I agree with you all the way Maggie and say Come Holy Spirit and cause a revival like no other for we know His returning is soon. Great inspiration. G ... | |
Reviewed by kingskid
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This is a very uplifting and inspiring poem. I too, desire that God's Spirit would dwell in me, so that He may use me to show others the love of God. ... | |
Reviewed by Springborn
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Maggie, this is very well put. Sometimes I have to wonder how long is the last day of man is in God's eyes. Men have been violent for centuries. Could ... | |
Reviewed by Joebirdies
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Maggie, I have come to look for these daily reminders of Faith and enlightenment. You are sharing your gift with us and it is well received and apprec ... | |
Reviewed by Sue
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