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Joebirdies
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Poem

The Lion Roared

The body of an infant lies
as passersby disturb the flies.

The silence of the dead is loud,
a soul survivor draws a crowd.

A victory for those who’ve tried
to reach the ones who have not died.

They dig each time they hear a sound,
but find the reaper’s made his round.

A doctor standing all alone,
the morphine helps but still they moan.

He knows he can not save them all,
the Earth has caused more walls to fall.

Their bodies must be piled in holes,
the ground gets flesh, the Lord their souls.

That’s the Haiti of today,
and friends this will not go away.

The ministries will help again,
but need the help of fellow men.

The money that is spent on war
could best be used to help the poor.

The money that we spend in space
would surely help the human race.

There’s much this world must now discuss,
the enemy we face is us.

As sure as Earth produced this cause,
it’s time that causes us to pause.

Or will we now fulfill His Creed,
and help the ones who are in need.

A poverty we long ignored
was noticed when the lion roared.

By Joebirdies

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From the author's book: Pieces of Existence
Chapter: Current Events
Poem first accepted for publication on Jan 17 2010

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

Joe, this is really a remarkable piece on the tragedy that struck Haiti...very emotive and filled with some really good couplets.  Especially lik ...

Reviewed by Susanne M. Psyris

The lion roared indeed. And I concur there is much we need to do and much we will do. But it is not entirely up to us, there is a whole world that nee ...

Reviewed by thisdarkache

It is a truly terrible tragedy and while many millions of dollars have been raised (maybe billions) the people there are so poor to begin with that mu ...

Reviewed by Prairie

joe, if you aren't already a member, or aware of, there area few poetry sites that you may be interested to check out.poets for peace...poets for  ...

Reviewed by leannefnt

The lion roared, indeed!  I know there have been hoards of people knocking themselves out for many, many, many years to help the people of Haiti, ...

Reviewed by Juvie on Jan 27 2010


sometimes we need a building to fall to open the eyes of the blind.  Sad but true state of the human condition.  Your poem is very eye openi ...

Reviewed by kgcummings

JoeI did not even attempt to penn anything about Haiti, I knew I just could not do it justice, you on the other hand have done a brilliant job with wo ...

Reviewed by KarenJeanMarie

Mate, when something touches your heart your pen roars, and your words carry the pain and suffering that we could not even begin to understand...As al ...

Reviewed by Lonelyriver

Very moving. You capture both the horror and the hope of a world dedicated to helping our brothers and sisters in their time of need. Also, your refer ...

Reviewed by Willie Wright

When the earth shrugs, it shows that we are truly insignificant. A poor country torn apart makes for a truly massive problem. We can only hope that a ...

Reviewed by callednow

Joe, this has surely been a powerful read - one that is so painfully true. When will we ever learn?  Your friend, Ruth ...

Reviewed by Maggie

YOU HAVE APTLY CAPTURED WHAT IS TRULY IMPORTANT, JOE. HELPING OUR FELLOWMAN...THE ONES THAT NEED MEDICAL CARE AND COMPASSION.  PUT PEOPLE TO WORK ...

Reviewed by Char

EXCELLANT and very poignant Joe!  You hace captured the veryy essence of this critical mass that we are faced with.  Haiti,..is here to remi ...

Reviewed by grandniem

WOW IS THE ONLY WORD I CAN THINK OF THAT DESCRIBES THE WRITING IN YOUR POEM. THE RHYMING COUPLETS ARE FANTASTIC AND THE EVEN FLOW OF CREATIVE WORDS EC ...

Reviewed by CDEEDS

I think this is often how it is. I see all the time that people don't notice things until they have to. You have captured that feeling well. Well done ...

Reviewed by Scarlettdreams.

What a pertinent piece! Such great tragedy... and now we wonder why...As always, Joe, you deliver a strong message in fine form. So very well done! xo ...

Reviewed by aliciag

An eye-opening piece! This is so smartly titled and the message cuts through all the fancy words and declares itself as bottom line! Two lines that re ...

Reviewed by #1Sue on Jan 18 2010


A very timely piece Joe.  I am certainly glad our military is large enough that we can send all the aid they are providing.  Had you noticed ...

Reviewed by W. E. Mitchell on Jan 18 2010


Seldom has a poem touched me more..You get right to the heart of any subject you care to write about..This unsurmountable tragedyhas shown us the stri ...

Reviewed by Mollie

Strong powerful words as always.  Another tradgedy and the world weeps.  There are no words to describe the sadness when the lion roars.Love ...

Reviewed by agnespaddy

Very good Joe.  To write something so meaningful out of such a great disaster. Excellent metaphor of that earthquake, "the lion roared"  So ...

Reviewed by Dickson

Joe, no  other writer can say it the way that you do...I have hesitated to write a piece even though this subject is so on top of us, hesita ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1

Joe, sad does not even begin to express what has happened! It is far beyond that! How wonderful it would be if war money and space money went to the p ...

Reviewed by dahmom

Such a devastating tragedy Joe...that rips to the heart of us all..your words, I cannot describe from the impact of them, I wept from the re ...

Reviewed by Dee

BRAVO!! Joe in this wonderfully written poem you have captured the way things really are today. So many things need changing, should have been ch ...

Reviewed by Janmp

The pictures we see cannot really tell of the horror of this event, we can only inagine - I am pleased so many are willing to go there and to hel ...

Reviewed by Chrissianne

Heart wrenching poem you have written.  I don't even like to watch the news.... but especially when something tragic like this has happened.  ...

Reviewed by Debra
 
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