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ChristopherSea
ChristopherSea
"Amidst Cherry Blossoms" One of my
watercolor paintings. My last few
poetry posts have been on Facebook
(ChristopherSea). It's been rather
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Poem

Ink

Lagoon liquid runes-
harbor the profound power
adrift in deep wells




Christopher William Cianci
copyright 2010
02/04/10

By ChristopherSea

Author's Comments:

From the author's book: Stratifications
Chapter: Haiku / Senryu
Poem first accepted for publication on Feb 04 2010

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

This is a very well written haiku that really made this reader think, which I do like to do. I enjoyed the second line as it connected the write perfe ...

Reviewed by Ace Spinnaker

With just three lines you can write a masterpiece my friend! This is a very wonderful and powerfully written Haiku. Such great work. Blessings and Hug ...

Reviewed by Janmp

A Brilliant Senryu!  We as poets do harbor the power...  of great emotion and inspiration in the tip of our quills as we splay our word ...

Reviewed by ILaurenLoves1

Ah, Poetic Knight...this is really one of the best Haiku I have read in a very long time.  Your word choices are brilliant and the penultimate is ...

Reviewed by Susanne M. Psyris

The deep wells of the written word and the power it creates are vivid in these three lines my friend.  I was adrift from the start.  Delight ...

Reviewed by agnespaddy

This is just gorgeous thinking and composing, Chris, of the caliber few poets will ever achieve, regardless however many words they may use.Some have ...

Reviewed by Richard

much enjoyed this write, love these and you did this write proud, i look at your painting when i read these words and the merge,  s ...

Reviewed by s7716

I have read lots of 5-7-5.. most without much impact.  I like the form myself... but this is just brilliant!  It is in the ink, or rather th ...

Reviewed by aliciag

Honestly, between you and I, I am not a big fan of Haiku, unless they are penned well... hence the reason why I review this piece... your clever words ...

Reviewed by Lonelyriver

Very cool Haiku, especially for anyone passionate for writing--a classic image that you've captured eloquantly and uniquely. I especially love the fir ...

Reviewed by Prairie

ChristopherI love the painting on your page and love even more that you paint, such tallents. Ink...like that title, such few words bring in such visi ...

Reviewed by KarenJeanMarie

Sadly, I have long  become used to Mr Biro's handy little invention, though I appreciate the pleasure that must be found from dunking the old qui ...

Reviewed by John Henry

There is power in the pen isn't there. I guess these days though there is more power in the tube. A lot of the commentary on the boob tube is pretty d ...

Reviewed by Joebirdies

Sometimes I wish I was alive in days of old when we dipped from an inkwell to pen our works.  Something very symbolic about it to me. You have ca ...

Reviewed by Scarlettdreams.

Well Hi Chris, nice to see you here today....great picture on your site...great haiku you have penned here....so this is where our ink comes from...wo ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1

Ah, the power of the written word....who would think that a glass bottle of ink made all of Shakespeare's works come alive before our eyes or&nbs ...

Reviewed by Chrissianne

A wonderful provacative poem that grasps the mind into deeper thought!  You have created a vivid piece of astounding imagery that delves below th ...

Reviewed by grandniem

I second what Chrissi has said. People do manage sometimes to tell a story or make a huge statement ina few words but this haiku is about the best I h ...

Reviewed by Mollie

Is it odd that the last line of this piece would be the one that held every last drop of meaning for me?  I took note of lovely alliteration and ...

Reviewed by EWMontgomery
 
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