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grandniem
grandniem
It's been a trying year,...family
cancer,..computer crash (lightening)
so,..I have not been about much. I
hope to be around more... as I miss
you gu... More

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Poem

Cleve,..Come Home~~
revived for Cleve


Revived for Cleve to read!

Cleve,..oh Cleve,...what has become of thou!!
They say you're ill, faring just so, right now!!
You know we can't have that,..you are a top dog...
No one can fill your shoes, not even whole hog!!

So,..red heads and blondes,...sounds full time,
Miss Clairol and poetry,could probably find some rhyme.
Heck,..if you've a notion, I have a box or two,..
And perhaps that ol' witches outfit would surely make do!!!

Now, I don't want to get you too excited, my sweet,
Dreamin' of those skimpy costumes, might knock you off your feet.
Just want to jog your memory,of what's here in store.
Are ya getting that ol' feeling,.just like before???

We'll save up some antics, to really get you to glow
Cause nothin' will keep you away for long, ya know?
And we will be awaitin' in out finest attire,....
Or lack thereof,..... oh what a fire!!!!



By grandniem

Author's Comments:
Just having some fun Cleve,..to put some spark back into that ol' zippy zapper!!!LOL LOL On a more serious note,..love ya much,..and please get well soon,..we miss you!!!!! Grace

From the author's book: Solitudes
Chapter: Other
Poem first accepted for publication on Feb 07 2010

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

Grace, This poem sure put a smile on my face.. We are all wishing Cleve a get well soon. I love the imagery you have created in this poem. Very well d ...

Reviewed by luricsam

Your sweetness is unparalleled and executed in this beautiful beckoning to Cleve to be back in good health amongst us. Thanks for sharing - arya ...

Reviewed by aryaindia

what a surprise. this is hillarious and did give me a good laugh. i'm beginning to fare very well and with a little more strength i will be back for l ...

Reviewed by CDEEDS

Sure to put a smile on Cleve's face when he does read this. I think it is great Grace. I bet those nursers he's chasing are getting pretty tired by no ...

Reviewed by Joebirdies

I hope Cleve feels better soon.  I'm not here often, but my heart hurts for him.I have him in my thoughts and prayers.thank you,whimsy ...

Reviewed by whimsical one

Grace,  If this dosn't make him feel better he is really sick.  LOL  I like the way you included other ladies and made referance to the ...

Reviewed by W. E. Mitchell

Grace, your words are sure to sparke a light in Cleves eye, we will all keep him in our prayers and hope for his quick return, s ...

Reviewed by s7716

Grace, you did a bang up write here!! Just what Cleve will need to get him going once he gets home and up to using the computer again!! I am sure this ...

Reviewed by Janmp

A great message for Cleve to get well and come back... He will love this one, I only hope his heart can stand the excitement.....One thing: First line ...

Reviewed by Mollie

lolol I so love from this fun packed well wishes for our Cleve,Grace...the imagery is one to surely see him hurrying back here...lolol..you are a riot ...

Reviewed by Dee

This is adorable and a very sweet/ vert hot getwell card for Poet Cleve Deeds! I hope you lovely gals get all skimpied up for me should I take ill! I ...

Reviewed by ChristopherSea

WELL GRACE THIS ONE REALLY MADE ME LAUGHI LOVE THE HUMOR THROUGHOUT..THIS IS SURE TO HAVE CLEVE IN A DITHER WITH YOUR VIVID DESCRIPTIONS...MAYBE IT IS ...

Reviewed by Aki on Feb 08 2010


Ha, and you call me  an Aussie rascal, and here you are taunting my mate with your slinky witches outfits..lol... you'll have him back ...

Reviewed by Lonelyriver

WELL, IF THIS ONE DOESN'T SPARK A LITTLE FIRE UNDER HIM, I DOUBT ANTHING WOULD, GRACE...LOL! I HAVE BEEN MISSING CLEVE, TOO, AND JUST PRAYING HE' ...

Reviewed by Char

Oh my...I am sure this one will make his blood pressure go up....lo,lo,lol,..just the thought of the witches do that...lo,lol,lo,....and the doctors w ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1

What a great poem Grace. Just thinking of your witches costume should get him going. If laughter is healing this should do the trick, He'l l be back a ...

Reviewed by Dickson

this is sure to bring a huge smile to his face! what a fun write... my favourite line? no-one can fill your shoes, not even the whole hog!...very tr ...

Reviewed by leannefnt

Grace, I am still laughing and I can clearly see the enjoyment your words are going to bring Cleve! xox Hugs Benita ...

Reviewed by dahmom

I sure hope he read's this one while still in the hospital..... that way if his heart starts to flutter a bit to much he'll receive proper care LOL!!! ...

Reviewed by Debra
 
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