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Mollie
Mollie
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Poem

THE OTHER SIDE:.(Joeysgirl footbridge challenge)

To Joeysgirl1

)))(((

I found it one misty morning.
As I walked to clear my head.
I was dreaming through the night
Some dreams of joy and some of dread.
Rustling in the herbs and grass
I heard a tiny sound
and when I tried to follow it
it scuttled underground.
But still I followed on
It was a gently pulsing hum
and suddenly up popped an elf
who smiled and bade me 'Come',
He led me to a babbling brook
and on the other side
I hardly dared to take a look,
such beauty met my eyes.
The greens were greener there
than any I have ever seen.
The sky above was bluer too
All dreamy, creamy, softest hue.
I felt such peace come over me
I really could have cried.
It's true the grass was greener
but on the other side.
The elf just grinned and whispered
so that only I could hear.
'I will show you how to reach it,
just stay with me, my dear'.
And there before my eyes
was a footbridge, gnarled it was,
very old and very small in size.
but my friend the elf took me across
and for a little while
I soaked up the sun, enjoyed myself
as he told me with a smile.
'Come back when things crowd in on you.
I'll always be your guide,
to take you for a sojourn
upon the other side.'
I woke for real right then
feeling fresh and bright.
Thanks to that lovely friendly elf
who helped me through the night.

)))(((

By Mollie

Author's Comments:
This was a waking dream inspired by Pat's challenge. Thank you Pat.

From the author's book: Mollie*s Musings
Chapter: Fantasy
Poem first accepted for publication on Feb 08 2010

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Reviews and Diamond Ratings for this poem

What a lovely dream my friend, and then you have followed it up with an awesome write.... I can see how you would awaken feeling refreshed, after jour ...

Reviewed by Lonelyriver

Mollie, you wove a delightful waking dream of pure fantasy.  I was completely mesmerized, for in reading this, I too, was "taken away" and able t ...

Reviewed by ShieldOfSouls

 What a wonderful dream this was Mollie! - A place that is greener than green with skies that are bluer than blue must come up trumps in mos ...

Reviewed by Maggie

I am always a bit amazed at what challenges can inspire in some poets minds. I know I shouldn't be when it comes to you, because after all these years ...

Reviewed by thisdarkache

From one of the best replies i have read from the challenge Mollie, great rhyme and flow and perfect clear imagery and then a lovely story about your ...

Reviewed by Dee

What an awesome fantasyThis place of sweet serenityFound over on the other sideThanks to a friendly elfin guideAnd many thanks to you f ...

Reviewed by Juvie

Fantastic Mollie, truely a delightful read! I could clearly see you and the elf on your merry adventure. xox Hugs Benita ...

Reviewed by dahmom

Still another facet of Mollie. You amaze me with your versatility. You take us to heaven in an earthly paradise so simple so natural its nature in all ...

Reviewed by bond007

Awe Mollie this brought tears to my eyes.  What a beautiful poem, a wonderful dream.  Somewhere for all of us, there is such a place.  ...

Reviewed by Debra

Oh Mollie...I loved it....This piece is so smooth and relaxing...and that little elf just completes the piece.......I think we need Joebirdies to buil ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1

What a wonderful story this is Mollie. Dream or no dream it's a beautiful respite. Your wonderful imagery led us down the path with you for a glimpse ...

Reviewed by Dickson

Oh, we all need an elf like this to help us have good sleep - send your dream to my head tonight so I can sleep well...wonderful visuals are brought i ...

Reviewed by Chrissianne

Mollie, you did a wonderful write for this challenge. You even crossed the foot bridge to the other side!! A very delightful read. Blessings and Hugs, ...

Reviewed by Janmp
 
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