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Poem



COUNTRY MISS
 [sonnet]



With locks untamed, cascading down her arms
in windswept waves of burnished auburn gold,
a puerile look belies coquettish charms...
as sea-green eyes flash hints of passion bold.   
Soft cheeks outshine the blush of fairest rose,
as trem'bling fingers graze her sun-kissed skin; 
he tastes of summer on her freckled nose,
delighting at the dimple in her chin.   
Upon love's countenance, sweet promise lies, 
of faithfulness endured and strength of will ; 
a gentle trace of grace in sultry sighs, 
he vows to never (ever) reap his fill  
nor heaven hold a candle to his girl... 
this country miss who sets his heart awhirl.


© 11/29/10
Char









By Char

Author's Comments:

From the author's book: HEART SONG
Chapter: Love / Romance
Poem first accepted for publication on Jan 11 2011

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Hi Char,  Great sonnet with wonderful flow and rythm.  Reminds me of a girl I used to know.  I'm still in love with her.  Warren ...

Reviewed by mitch

Hi there. This is a wonderful sonnet leaves me yearning for that tender touch of love. The flow is great and I hope this review gets through. The word ...

Reviewed by jlvick

Oh Char, where can I meet this girl? in the country I suppous, what a stunning piece of work, wow, think I'll go back to painting by numbers and readi ...

Reviewed by moogster

Hello Char. Thank you for the invite to this poetry site. It is very new to me.  Your "Country Miss" sonnet is lovely. T ...

Reviewed by Paleoray

A sonnet so eloquent that brings romance to life!  The visuals conveyed are sweet and moving, the flow is smooth and lovely! A deserving poem of ...

Reviewed by sleepingbeauty

So tenderly expressed and beautifully articulated. Couched in more or less modern terms and yet it contains expressions worthy of Shakespeare himself! ...

Reviewed by bickerstaffe

Have you thought of taking up romance novels?  There is more money in those than in poetry and you my dear friend have a talent for romantic imag ...

Reviewed by aliciag

You are indeed the queen of sonnets, bnut more than that you write with a style that touches the pulse of the American soul that so many in this count ...

Reviewed by thisdarkache

Wow Char, your writing is going from strength to strength and your "Poem of the week" is well deserved. This is a good comtender for "Poem of the mont ...

Reviewed by Maggie

Aaahhh Sighhhhhh, so so soft and with a breath of Heaven  makes this Sonnet a true treasure to read and relish. Your talent really shines brigh ...

Reviewed by sherylfire

First congrat's on your poem of the week win, a well deserved win!  I don't know how I missed reading this one.  I absolutely love it, there ...

Reviewed by Debra

Oh, goodness-ME!Now, I feel so danged happy...so joyous and free...you virtually make my heart skip, both from the skills of your poetry and from the ...

Reviewed by Richard

Char, this has such a sweet, wild taste of romance and the imagery paints a charming picture of a man's enduring love. xox Love Benita ...

Reviewed by dahmom

I think maybe this is autobiographical!  You must surely be the girl, judging by your photo!  Beautiful writing as usual...I wish I could wr ...

Reviewed by Chrissianne

CharI just cannot express the impact of this beauty to you. The words just take me out ther and then the power of the words reel me in. This is a ...

Reviewed by KarenJeanMarie

What a very  beautiful sonnet this dear Char!And our beautiful heroine here must be exactly the sort of country girl we all imagine to ...

Reviewed by John Henry

I just love this. Great descriptives. Wonderful flow.  Who wouldn't fall in love with this girl?  She sounds just perfect.  Well done. ...

Reviewed by Scarlettdreams.

GREAT WORK CHAR. THIS ONE REMINDS ME OF THE SONG, "WOLVERTON MOUNTAIN" WHERE THIS BEAUTIFUL GIRL LIVE UNKNOWN TO MEN UNTIL ONE DAY A MAN SAW HER GATHE ...

Reviewed by CDEEDS

A totally bewitching poem, Char... I know a certain gentleman down south of this country who will love this one...as I do...Thank you.Mollie x ...

Reviewed by Mollie

Char, this is a lovely sonnet... you describe her perfectly even to the dimple in her chin...she is the picture of loveliness .... great imagery here. ...

Reviewed by joeysgirl1

How lovely Char. Your visuals so good, you made this country Miss come alive with the bloom of youth just starting out on life. The gentleness of his ...

Reviewed by Dickson

HELLO CHAR, YOU REALLY DESCRIBED A LOVELY COUNTRY ROSE  ON THE VERGE OF BEING IN FULL BLOOM...NONE OF THIS BEAUTY WAS WASTED ON HER LOVER AS HE D ...

Reviewed by Aki on Jan 11 2011


This country girl you have described so well is the perfect match  of what a country girl should be. The imagery and emotions in this lovely ...

Reviewed by Janmp
 
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