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| Poem |
We Know We know a mind
gets frightened
when the wheels
reach overload.
Take time
to find the logic
to the system of it all.
Next time
you want to think...
think of all
the time you spend
trying to find
a reason
to whatever
mood I'm in.
Stop that silly mumble
take a big bite
of the pie.
Let life's flavors
blend together.
Savor every taste you try.
Benita Smith Richards | By dahmom
| Author's Comments: | | Breathe deep and smile :-) | From the author's book: I Believe In Miracles | | Chapter: Philosophy | | Poem first accepted for publication on May 22 2008 | Review this poem | | Add this Author to my favorites | | Send message to dahmom | | |
| Full review |
| A very amusing home-bred slice of philosophy, Benita.
Took a deep breath and smiled..
Yes!!It's working..Good for you.
Thank you.
Mollie..(()) |
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